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Horrid Dialogue Changes
« on: 27 March 2015, 23:27:45 »
I've asked Kim if she's okay with this thread, and she is, so without further ado...

This thread is basically where you post dialogue you feel is horrible in the public releases. (Not pre-alpha or alpha or beta.)
Feel free to suggest an alternative, if you want.

Either way, depending on how many people agree with the horribleness of the dialogue, it might get changed.
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Re: Horrid Dialogue Changes
« Reply #1 on: 21 November 2015, 08:53:50 »



I think there's a mistake here...
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Re: Horrid Dialogue Changes
« Reply #2 on: 24 November 2015, 13:15:02 »
A human that was turned into a human. How humanly like humanity. :P
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Re: Horrid Dialogue Changes
« Reply #3 on: 29 November 2015, 14:30:50 »
Will be fixed when I get better.
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Re: Horrid Dialogue Changes
« Reply #4 on: 20 December 2015, 09:29:31 »
Actually, I thought it was intentional :o
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Re: Horrid Dialogue Changes
« Reply #5 on: 30 December 2015, 08:11:46 »
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I hear Valkyrie used to be a human, before she was poisoned and turned into a human.
Er. Mecha. She used to be a human before she was turned into a mecha. Sorry.
Looks intentional to me.
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Re: Horrid Dialogue Changes
« Reply #6 on: 04 January 2016, 14:14:20 »
Ha ha, yeah. I figured it would be fitting for her. :P

… though, if Pteri has issues with that, I can always change it.
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« Reply #7 on: 30 October 2019, 16:31:36 »
Hoo boy, the final boss's dialogue could be changed to something better. As is, it's all just references. Thankfully, you can skip the dialogue and go straight onto the fight itself.

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